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Lady Redclaw phase 1 by Meister-Goldfeder Lady Redclaw phase 1 by Meister-Goldfeder
First Painting used for a Prop...

It got Reworked with acrylics later for a better Impact

based on the likeness of german Actress Petra Feilen:

What comes to mind is that shes an interesting character and so I made a draw over [link]
The values you know, you have to differentiate the figure from the background, so I grey scaled that.
Then there's the anatomy, you got your humeral head, deltoids, corocoid process of clavicle and pectoral muscles that shape that area. the fingers should also be a bit longer and the metacarpals stop at the carpals and don't run all the way to the radius. also a sort of parenthesis forms around the lips when smiling, gives it more rhythm. and I reestablished the mid line. Also some highlights on the hair to draw focus.
The shadows instead of being darker I made them cooler and warmed up the light and added some red where the blood hangs out. I moved the belt and beuws a bit...Don't pay heed to the star ratings I just gave you four all around is not what I would comment on but the other things rather. great job and i'll keep an eye on the next one.
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Eviscares Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sehr sehr cool. Bin gespannt auf die Version in Acryl.
Meister-Goldfeder Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Professional General Artist
thx ^^
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